Please write a 6 point summary over chapter 8.
Write in complete sentences in paragraph form.
Use proper grammar, spelling and punctuation.
Sentence 1: Overall idea
Sentence 2: Beginning event
Sentence 3: Middle event
Sentence 4: Ending event
Sentence 5: Your thoughts and feelings and why
Sentence 6: Prediction
Write in complete sentences in paragraph form.
Use proper grammar, spelling and punctuation.
Sentence 1: Overall idea
Sentence 2: Beginning event
Sentence 3: Middle event
Sentence 4: Ending event
Sentence 5: Your thoughts and feelings and why
Sentence 6: Prediction
27 comments:
Cole was going up to the Spirit Bear and was trying to scare him away, But than he droped the ARROW and the bear lunged at him.
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Cole was just mauled by a bear.The beginning event is that he tried to throw the spear and missed .The middle event is that the bear mauled and nearly killed him that is bad.The ending event is when he actually gets some sence knocked into him.I think it was stupid of him to try to throw the spear at the bear.I think it all happened for a purpose.
What mainly happened was Cole got attacked by a bear. Cole tied to kill the bear. Cole got attacked by the bear. Cole can only move his left arm and head. I think that it was a stupid idea to attack the bear. My prediction is that Cole will lay there for days.
The overall idea of the chapter is the bear and cole fought. The bear tore coles arm off. Cole couldnt barely breathe. The seagulls ate coles flesh. My thoughts are yuck. My prediction is Garvy and them are not going to believe cole that he fought a bear.
This chapter was about Cole saw the bear again and he the bea mad. The bear took Cole and made Cole bleed alot and Cole was yelling stop stop!!!! Cole was really scared! I think Cole will either escape or let the bear help him.
I think it was a said chapter.Cole getes attact by the bear.The bear would not stop at all.The bear stops but Cole thinks he is going to die.I think Cole will make it but he will be nice to the bear.
The main event that happened in this book was Cole nearly got killed by the bear. Cole was ready to attack when the bear was really close to him. The bear just destroys Cole in just a wicked pace. Cole doesn't care if he's on the island at all. I feel sorry for Cole because he's all messed up because he shouldn't deserve to die like that. I think he will find a way to stay alive on the island.
Cole was getting up to scare the bear away with his blade but the bear pushed him down and hurt him. my thoughts were that Cole should have just left spirit bear alone instead of trying to kill him.my pridiction was that Cole ends up killing spirit bear.
Cole was about to kill the bear but the bear jumped on him and started to kill him than Cole tryed to fight back but he had no chance with the bear, after the bear left Cole laid there on the ground not able to move and the seagulls eating his stringy flesh.
The overall idea in the chapter is that the Bear comes and attacks Cole. The beginning event is that Cole broke his jaw and two ribs. The middle event is that the seagulls were eating all his fleash and Cole was getting really mad at the seagulls for doing that. The ending event is that he could not move his arm or his legs. My thoughts and feelings are that Cole is not going to care that he broke his jaw and my feelings are that he will not tell anyone that he broke his jaw because then they will laugh at him all the time. My prediction is that the bear is going to go back in the forest and when Cole walks in there the Bear will attack him to death.
He got mad at the bear. He got beat up by the bear. He cracked his ribs. The bear let him go. I think cole is an idiot in this chapter. I predict that the bear will come back.
The overall idea of the chapter is the bear and cole fought. The bear tore coles arm off. Cole couldnt barely breathe. The seagulls ate coles flesh.The bear took Cole and made Cole bleed alot and Cole was yelling stop stop!!!! Cole was really scared! I think Cole will get the bear back.
The overall idea of the chapter is the bear and cole fought. The bear tore coles arm off. Cole couldnt barely breathe. The seagulls ate coles flesh.The bear took Cole and made Cole bleed alot and Cole was yelling stop stop!!!! Cole was really scared! I think Cole will get the bear back.
Cole kept seeing a bear that always pops up in the middle of no where.Cole got a sphere and tryed to stab the bear, but he did stab the bear abd nothing happened.The bear kept attacking him .When the bear was done attacking Cole, Cole just layed on the ground.i thought it was an ok story but i still feel sorry for him.I predict he me recover from his injuryes
The idea is that he need to be nice and that will happen to him. He got beat up. He tried to win the battle.
He got the poop pushed out of him. He should have been nice to the bear. He will not be able to swim.
The overall main idea is that he had a fight with the bear and was brutal hurt. He was fighting the bear and his body was broken. He saw birds coming and they pecked meat off of his bones. He felt really lonly and that was his biggest fear. My thoughts are that he will be like that for a really long time. My prediction is that he is going to be eaten until he is found by someone.
The main event that happed in this book was that Cole nearly got killed by the spirit bear. Cole was ready to attack when the bear was really close to him. The bear just destroys Cole is just a wicked pace. Cole doesn't care if he's on the island at all. I feel sorry for Cole because, he's all messed up because, he shouldn't deserve to die like that. I think he will find a way to stay alive on the island.
1)The overall idea of this chapter is that Cole has been mean to a bear that doesn't like that so the bear beats Cole up.2)The beginning event starts when the Cole flung the spear at the bear.3)The middle event is when the bear decides that Cole learned his lesson and left him there to die.4)The end event is when Cole felt lonely and didn't think it was fair that the left him by his self.5) I fell that Cole got what he deserved and now he knows how Peter feels.6)I predict that Cole will survive and go back to Minneapolis a new man.
This is what mainly happened was that cole was attacked by the bear and and broke his ribs and broke his jaw pretty much everything.
Cole had been getting ripped up by a bear. He tried grabbing devils club and got his hand destroied. He tried to stab the bear but he didnt. The seagle were triing to eat his flesh.
cole tried to kill the spirit bear by throwing a spear at him but it didn't work. the spirit bear just ran after him and started to hurt him. cole tried to run away but that didn't work either. my thoughts and feelings are sad for cole getting hurt by the bear. my predication is that cole will die before he gets back home.
The main event that happened in this book was that Cole nearly got killed by the spirit bear.Cole was ready to attack when the bear was really close to him.The bear destroys Cole is just a wicked pace.Cole doesn't care if he's on the island at all.I feel sorry for Cole because,he shouldn't deserve to die like that.I think he will find a way to stay alive on the island.
The overall idea that he was trying to kill the spirt bear. The beginning event is that he is getting beat up by the bear.
the middle event that the seagualles are eating his flesh.
The ending event is that Coel could not move his arms or legs.
My thoughts and feelings is that Cole is not going to care about what the bear did to him.
My predcition is that cole will die in the forest.
Cole gets injured buy a bear and now he knows what it feels like for peter but cole got it worse.Now cole is lying there all by himself helpless.
Scores:
10 points possible
6th hour:
1. 6 - #4,5 nc; periods; caps
2. 7 - #2 nc; caps; spelling
3. not posted
4. 10 - perfect!!!
5. 9 - spelling; good job!
6. 9 - need more detail
7. 5 - 3 sentences missing; caps; spelling
7th hour:
1. 8 - caps; great!
2. 9 - good; spelling
3. 6 - #3,5 nc; restate the question
4. 6 - #3,5 nc; restate
5. 6 - #1 nc; restate
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7. 6 - spelling; #4,5 nc; watch your grammar
8. 6 - #5 nc; spelling; periods
9. 8 - caps
8th hour:
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4. 10 - Perfect!!
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6. 7 - spelling; need more detail in your sentences
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8. 9 - need more detail in your sentences
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The overall idea is that Cole got beat up by a bear.
The beginning idea is that Cole tries to swim and get back alive.
The middle event is that Cole tries to fight the bear but it runs away.
The ending is about Cole is getting beat up by the bear and it broke his jaw, hip, arm,
I beat it will come back
Cole almost died. He was thorwn.
He broke some legs and ribs. He saw seagulls eating his fleash. He kinda deserved it. He will live.
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